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Fish in a Puddle by *KarmaBum:iconKarmaBum:



today i learned
that fish don't grow
larger than the size
of their bowl.

this is just in case
they were born in a puddle
i was told.

could you imagine
living your whole life
in a puddle?

i can.

we're not so
different really
from those fish.

stunted and trapped
in our own
murky little puddles.

swimming in circles
trying vainly to find a way
to the ocean.
©2008-2009 *KarmaBum
:iconkarmabum:

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:icon6hex6moondancer6:
This is amazing. I can't even tell you why I like it so much, but I'm in love with it.

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if guys in dresses are transvestites, then why aren't girls in pants?
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today i decided to be a girl. tomorrow might be different. it depends on what mood i'm in, really...
:iconkarmabum:
thanks! always great to hear someone enjoys your work

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To a mind that is still, the whole universe surrenders.
:iconemilynewillowar:
...wow.

That's all I have to say.

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"Got the radio on, my old blue jeans, and I'm wearin' my heart on my sleeve." -Taylor Swift; "A Place In This World"
:iconkarmabum:
Thank you, I'm glad you enjoyed it =)

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To a mind that is still, the whole universe surrenders.

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